The column that I chose dealt with the problem and
decision many schools face around America--should teachers carry weapons in the
case of an unfortunate event? This piece of writing deals with Krista's opinion
on the occasion and also provides reasoning, and at the end, it also has an
idea for the readers to take action on this topic. Read Full
Column Here.
The quote, "Despite the
emotionally charged images painted by the plan's promoters – including children
being shot and thrown off school rooftops by al-Qaida operatives – this is a
topic to be approached with caution and dispassion. School shootings are tragic
beyond imagining, and all of us should apply our best thinking and resources to
prevent them. But sending weapons into schools – the vast majority of which
have not been and will not be the scene of violence – is the most unwise of
solutions," is filled with a variety of writing craft. The use of various
hyphens lengthens the sentence without making it just long a boring. She also
uses a variety of examples that lead to this topic being brought up in schools
which include very explicit ideas. She states her claim in this
"topic" sentence and just outlines what she will state later in her
column.
Some patterns found in
her writing include some of the following: she states her claim near the beginning
like, “the vast majority of which have not been and will not be the scene of
violence – is the most unwise of solutions,” and “Dr. Joseph Clark, a professor
of neurology and rehabilitative medicine with UC Health, worries that it’s
shrinking it.” Those quotes both outline what she will be talking about later
in her column. Also, in those quotes, there is pieces of evidence. These
include: Dr. Joseph Clark and the children being shot and thrown off buildings.
She is very straightforward and I think that is because she can’t write novels
on these topics, they have to be short and sweet.
What has been your
greatest challenge being a columnist?
What education did you
receive to become a columnist?
What makes you come to
work and write columns many times throughout the week?
What is your opinion on the topic that Krista Ramsey decided to cover; whether or not to allow people to carry weapons for self defense? Truthfully I think it would be a mistake to allow such things for people to have at a school, where there are tons of innocent people who shouldn't have to worry about the risk of them getting injured/killed.
ReplyDeleteI think this was a very well written article Sion. Your analysis of the quote and opinion on the techniques were spot on. I also liked your questions for Krista Ramsey.
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